The three Muslim Empires of the 1300-1700 time period each made significant contributions to their worlds and the rest of world history. Why did the Muslim world not come to dominate world affairs during this time period?
Paragraph Writing: Using TEEEL Structure
Topic Sentence
This is the main idea that you want to make about the topic. It should state in one sentence what your paragraph is going to be about.E.g. While the Muslim empires of the 14th-16th centuries had significant impacts on the world, they never came to dominate as Europe will because... (remember "rule of 3")
-because of their religious tendency
- too much centralization of power
- not much mind to conquest the world
Elaboration
Write one or two sentences explaining your topic sentence. E.g. location? time period?
-the ottoman empire in turkey (1300 -1920) -safavid empire in persia (1500 - 1720s) -mughal empire in india( 1500-1850s)
Examples/Evidence
Explain specific evidence/examples for your 3 choices in your topic sentence.
- Unlike Christianity, their religion Hindi, and Islam main idea is a peace. They while they conquest or try to muslim empires didn't force tmen to believe their religion
- Too much centralization of power causes only concentrate in politics but no other else.
- They didn't had great mind to conquest the world, they usually conquest other countries to spread their religion.
Explanation/analysis
This is a crucial part of the paragraph which requires some thought. Here, you need to explain how the evidence/examples you provided support your main idea in the topic sentence. WHY did you choose these reasons over others? Give specific reasons AND how they explain the failure of the Muslim empires to achieve world dominance at that time.. E.g. Clearly the administrative methods used by some of the leaders of the Muslim Empires hurt their ability to rise to world dominance because...This should be about 4 sentences in length.
One hand on Quran one hand a knife you might heard these phrase a lot but actually they were not that cruel to spread their religion this phrase were actually made by Europe during the crusades war. Many people think muslim countries are cruel but as I said they didn't they did not force people to believe their religion, if you think Europe force them to believe christianity. For example Magellan if he was from muslim countries and Islam he would have said this is a good religion and explain a bit in Philippine he force Philippine first nation as a result he died. Muslim countries had good kings however most kings didn't administrate their country properly some just used all taxes. To conquest and administrate a bid land is not a easy things to do. If you have big land as a following you should have many army to protect your land. Some cities like a cities that is far from the main cities requires a lots of hand(Kings). To mange a big land it takes many generations of kings however not many kings did a good job. So it failed.
Link Sentence
This sentence summarizes your paragraph and links back to the main idea in the topic sentence. When writing an essay, the role of the this sentence is to link paragraph back to your thesis.
Since their purpose for conquesting the countries were to spread their own religion, so there wasn't much strong mind to conquest the world. Muslim countries also some kings administer there countries for their own success. These minds collected and resulted as not dominating the world.
The three Muslim Empires of the 1300-1700 time period each made significant contributions to their worlds and the rest of world history. Why did the Muslim world not come to dominate world affairs during this time period?
Paragraph Writing: Using TEEEL Structure
Topic Sentence
This is the main idea that you want to make about the topic. It should state in one sentence what your paragraph is going to be about.E.g. While the Muslim empires of the 14th-16th centuries had significant impacts on the world, they never came to dominate as Europe will because... (remember "rule of 3")
-because of their religious tendency
- too much centralization of power
- not much mind to conquest the world
Elaboration
Write one or two sentences explaining your topic sentence. E.g. location? time period?
-the ottoman empire in turkey (1300 -1920)
-safavid empire in persia (1500 - 1720s)
-mughal empire in india( 1500-1850s)
Examples/Evidence
Explain specific evidence/examples for your 3 choices in your topic sentence.
- Unlike Christianity, their religion Hindi, and Islam main idea is a peace. They while they conquest or try to muslim empires didn't force tmen to believe their religion
- Too much centralization of power causes only concentrate in politics but no other else.
- They didn't had great mind to conquest the world, they usually conquest other countries to spread their religion.
Explanation/analysis
This is a crucial part of the paragraph which requires some thought. Here, you need to explain how the evidence/examples you provided support your main idea in the topic sentence. WHY did you choose these reasons over others? Give specific reasons AND how they explain the failure of the Muslim empires to achieve world dominance at that time.. E.g. Clearly the administrative methods used by some of the leaders of the Muslim Empires hurt their ability to rise to world dominance because...This should be about 4 sentences in length.
One hand on Quran one hand a knife you might heard these phrase a lot but actually they were not that cruel to spread their religion this phrase were actually made by Europe during the crusades war. Many people think muslim countries are cruel but as I said they didn't they did not force people to believe their religion, if you think Europe force them to believe christianity. For example Magellan if he was from muslim countries and Islam he would have said this is a good religion and explain a bit in Philippine he force Philippine first nation as a result he died. Muslim countries had good kings however most kings didn't administrate their country properly some just used all taxes. To conquest and administrate a bid land is not a easy things to do. If you have big land as a following you should have many army to protect your land. Some cities like a cities that is far from the main cities requires a lots of hand(Kings). To mange a big land it takes many generations of kings however not many kings did a good job. So it failed.
Link Sentence
This sentence summarizes your paragraph and links back to the main idea in the topic sentence. When writing an essay, the role of the this sentence is to link paragraph back to your thesis.
Since their purpose for conquesting the countries were to spread their own religion, so there wasn't much strong mind to conquest the world. Muslim countries also some kings administer there countries for their own success. These minds collected and resulted as not dominating the world.